Guest Post Interlude - Week #6: ClearMadness

This week's post is by ClearMadness, author of The Iron Teeth

The Iron Teeth by ClearMadness

Prologue: The Doom of Coroulis

Blood poured from the man's wounds onto the cold ground beneath him. He was dying, and beyond help now. He choked and gasped as blood filled his throat, but he fought to hold still and at least die with dignity. In his last moments, and in front of all these witnesses, he wasn't going to go out thrashing around like a fish out water.

He refused to have regrets! He had done the best he could, and died for what he had believed in. His would be the last laugh anyway. He could still feel the inhuman eyes that watched him, and blazed with hate. The fools had no idea of the forces they had unleashed and what was coming.

Yet, as the man's vision faded to black, scenes from his past began to play out before him. His last breath rattled through his teeth and he couldn't help but think back to how it had all began.

------Many Years Ago------

A younger man shivered as an arctic gust blew in over the city walls and slammed into him.  He pulled his heavy coat and cloak tighter in an attempt to keep the cold at bay, as snow swirled through the air around him.

The wind died down as suddenly as it had begun and the city around the man was revealed. He trudged past the stone and wooden buildings that lined the snow filled streets. Warm light leaked out from cracks in the doors and shutters of the nearby homes illuminating the surroundings as the sun set in the cloudy sky overhead.

Most the inhabitants of the city had long ago taken shelter from the dark and cold, and they were undoubtedly huddled close to the tame flames of their household fireplaces. The man grumbled as he pictured it. He hoped he would soon be sitting down beside a cozy fire.

After shuffling through the snow and wind for several minutes the relieved young man found himself standing outside his destination, a tall well maintained two story home. It was located in the merchant's quarter, and while it wasn't quite a mansion the owner was obviously well to do.

Wasting no time he moved off the street and over to the house's door to announce himself. He meant to knock politely but instead his fist pounded against the door loudly. He really wanted out of the miserable cold; it was freezing out here.

Nothing happened for a few seconds as the man shivered and rubbed his hands together for warmth. Then the door opened and bathed the man and the path behind him in bright light. The visitor peered though the sudden light to see that a tall well dressed man had opened the door for him.

“Jerack, by the gods man. Come on out of the weather. You must be absolutely freezing,” the master of the house said as he led Jerack inside. After quickly knocking some of the snow off of his cloak Jerack stepped eagerly inside.

The reception room of the house was lit by a steady oil lamp on a small table and decorated by various portraits and paintings. After a quick glance at his guest and taking in Jerack's sorry state the wealthy man frowned and turned to look down the hallway.

“Aness please get one of the servants to put some hot tea on for Jerack. The young fool walked here and is half frozen to death,” he yelled before turning back to his guest.

“Thank you uncle Reighur, it's brutal out there. I almost thought I wasn't going to make it,” the young man replied gratefully. Some hot tea would really warm him up. His uncle gave him a questioning look.

“I honestly thought you'd be staying home tonight. I didn't expect you to have to brave the elements when I invited you over. We could have always done this another time,” Reighur told his nephew. Jerack looked a little embarrassed as he hung his coat and cloak on the stand by the door.

“Oh, well it wasn't that bad out. Every real Coroulian can take a little ice and snow. Otherwise they would have moved south or back across the ocean to the Homelands,” Jerack joked.

“Be that as it may, it was still a somewhat foolish thing to do,” his uncle replied. “Well you're here now so let's get you somewhere warmer while we talk. The library fireplace is lit. Follow me.”

Reighur then led his guest down the hallway towards the library. Jerack was feeling much warmer already. They arrived in the library and Reighur pointed him towards a large cushioned chair. Jerack sat down and his uncle took the seat opposite of him.

There was a small ornate wooden table between them and the fire place blazed cheerfully to his left. The library was an average sized room and several bookshelves stood against the walls. There was lots of room for more books on the shelves though, as books were an expensive luxury.

As Jerack was making himself comfortable a young maid walked into the room with a porcelain teapot and cups on a silver tray. She placed the tray on the table and poured him and his uncle a cup of tea from the pot, before curtsying and walking away.

Both Reighur and Jerack took a sip of tea. Jerack found the tea delicious and it warmed him considerably as he sipped it. He shivered one last time as the warm liquid and heat from the fire drove the last vestiges of cold away.

“So your father tells me you want to join the guard. Why the sudden decision?” Reighur asked his nephew politely. Jerack frowned in response. He didn't think it was a sudden decision at all.

“Well you know what's going on in the world right now better than I do, uncle,” Jerack stated as his uncle nodded. “Teshura and Hulgaron have been at war for a while now, and while they are pretty far to the south it seems more than likely that Eloria and Deveshur will start fighting soon as well. If that happens we won’t be able to stay out of the fighting. It seems like we're going to need soldiers very soon.”

His uncle raised an eyebrow and displayed a questioning expression.

“So you want to join the Elorian army?” Reighur asked tentatively. Jerack shook his head vehemently in response.

“No uncle, I’m not a fool. I've heard you, father, and others talking. The king of Eloria may think he owns Coroulis but no one here wants to die for him. Half the city is from Deveshur,” Jerack explained. His uncle sighed before responding.

“I see you've put quite a bit of thought into this. So what do you think is going to happen then?” his uncle asked.

“Coroulis is the greatest city of the North. It's barely garrisoned, pays pretty much no taxes, and is run by the city council. I know you and father think that the city will break away before getting caught up in a southern war, and I think you're right. If it does separate then it will pull the rest of the North with it into a new country. I think that country will need an army and someone in the Coroulian guard would be well placed to rise when that army is formed,” Jerack continued passionately. His uncle looked thoughtful.

“You're not completely wrong,” his uncle replied after several thoughtful seconds. “Very well, I will help you get into the guard. I think that yours is not a bad plan.” Jerack eyes opened in surprise. He had not expected his uncle to support him. His father had been set against it.

“Thank you, uncle! By the gods I swear I will return the favor someday,” Jerack exclaimed excitedly. His uncle chuckled.

“No need to be so melodramatic, Jerack. I know your father disapproves of how much time you spend outside instead of working with him. The gods know it's dangerous outside the walls but you should do what you want with your life. That's how I became a merchant after all,” Reighur told Jerack.

After that both of them made small talk and discussed the latest events. Soon however the tea had grown cold, the fire had burned down, and they grew tired. Jerack yawned.

“Well I really should be getting back uncle. Thank you for having me over, and again thank you so much for your support,” Jerack said. His uncle looked surprised.

“Nonsense nephew, I won't have you going back out in such terrible weather at this time of night. You will stay over tonight and head back tomorrow morning. I will have the servants prepare a room for you,” Reighur insisted. Jerack thought about it. He didn't want his father to worry about him but at this time of night he was undoubtedly already in bed. As long as headed home at dawn before his father awoke it shouldn't be a problem.

“Very well, thank you again uncle,” Jerack answered. Both the men then got up and shook hands as they said goodnight. Reighur then called for a servant to take Jerack to his chamber, and the young man went to bed.

Jerack was awoken by the clanging of bells early the next morning. That wasn't right. What time was it? Groggily he got to his feet and opened the window's shutters. Outside the dawn sun was still rising over the snow covered city and had yet to banish the last of the night's darkness. Why were the city bells ringing so early? It made no sense. With a yawn he quickly got dressed and walked out into the halls.

The halls were deserted so he marched to the kitchen. There several servants were chatting excitedly amongst themselves. Most looked either very tired or very worried.

“What's going on?” he asked loudly and authoritatively as he entered the room. He hoped someone here knew. A sense of nervousness had been slowly building within him ever since he had woken up. All the servants turned to him as he spoke. They cast each other nervous glances before one answered.

“We don't know, sir. All we know is the city bells are ringing and Marial says it's the call to arms. Although the rest of us aren't so sure,” one older woman answered hesitantly. Jerack thought she was his uncle's cook.

Was it an attack? That made no sense. Who would or even could attack them in the dead of winter. Even traders stopped arriving for the most part when the roads filled with snow. Jerack frowned.

“Are my uncle and aunt awake?” he asked.

“We were just deciding whether to wake them, sir,” the woman answered nervously.

“Do so, and tell them I'm heading out to find out what's going on and should be back soon with some answers,” Jerack commanded them. He then turned around and swiftly made for the entrance. His hurried footsteps caused the wooden floor to creak beneath him.

Wrapping his cloak and coat tightly he stepped out the front door and back into the frigid white city streets. With a sigh he started stomping through the snow drifts towards the road. His breath was white and visible in the cold air, but at least the morning sun warmed him a little and the wind had died down.

The streets were mostly deserted, as was normal for this early in the morning. However a small group of people were huddled together in a nearby sheltered doorway. They looked apprehensive and uneasy to Jerack. He was just about to head over to them when he heard the clutter of horseshoes on stone. Looking over he saw riders wearing guard uniforms coming down the street. The guardsmen didn't seem to be slowing as they approached so Jerack called out to them.

“Why are the bells ringing? What's going on?” he yelled as loudly as he could. The riders blew past him as they raced toward their destination but one turned towards Jerack and replied.

“There's a drake lose in the city. It was last seen around Lowpoint. Please return to your homes citizens,” the guardsman yelled back before he and his fellow riders disappeared down the road. They left nothing but a long cloud of swirling snow behind them.

A drake! That made no sense; everyone knew they went underground into the Deeps for the winter. Wait, had the guard said Lowpoint? That was where his father's house was! The bells probably wouldn't have woken him; he had always been a sound sleeper.

Jerack had to go make sure his father was safe! He took off down the street towards his home. The snow crunched under his feet and took to the air as he kicked it up.

As he ran through the city the quality of the buildings dropped. They became smaller and less ornate with more wood and less stone or brick. His father lived in the workman's area of the city.

He passed several small groups of talking people as he ran. One group even called out to him but he ignored them all as he hurried home. He had no time for them. He had to make sure his father was safe!

As he turned the corner towards Lowpoint he was unprepared and thus overwhelmed by a sudden terrible roar. He stumbled in surprise and fright as the deep scream cascaded over him. Even his bones seemed to shake for a second.

Jerack had heard the howl of a drake before and seen their tracks out in the forest, but he had never seen one face to face. Few people had and lived. With a feeling of dread he realized that this drake sounded very close and very large. He paused in his run. Did he really want to run over there? He had no choice though, he had get his father to safety.

He started running again and soon new frightful noises reached his ears. He heard the sound of something heavy smashing into buildings and the sound of collapsing rubble. Screams of horror and pain quickly followed.

With a start Jerack realized people were dying. Then an unexpected splash of color up against a nearby wall caught his eye.

It was a shredded corpse. Its blue guardsman uniform and the crimson blood dripping from its ripped open stomach were the source of the colours.

Jerack froze and gagged. Desperately he tried not to vomit. Looking about he spotted another discarded human body, and then another. His eyes went wide with fear and he choked painfully as he spewed vomit onto the snow at his feet uncontrollably.

What was going on here? The terrible scene before him made no sense. Even a large drake shouldn't be this big of a problem for the guards, and it certainly shouldn't be crushing buildings! Jerack began to twitch and go pale as he panicked.

Suddenly he heard more screams, and these ones were alarmingly close. His head jerked to the right to see a small group of people run past him. They were a man and a woman clutching a small child to her breast, a family.

The terror on their faces was plain and struck Jerack hard, drawing out his own fear. They weren't even dressed for the weather. Something dreadful must have driven them from their home without giving them any time to plan whatsoever.

Jerack was terrified now. He wanted to continue on but he couldn't take another step forward, no matter how hard he tried. He was frozen in fear, and it shamed him deeply. His father...

A sudden gust whipped past and blew snow into the air all around him. He felt goose bumps rise on his skin as the temperature plummeted.

From somewhere out in the white haze that had risen around him a explosive cracking sound erupted. Jerack blindly spun around in fright as his heart tried to leap out of his chest.  Horror awaited him as the wind died down.

For a second he didn't believe his eyes. Crouched on the still crumbling remains of a casually demolished house sat the drake. The size of its grey scaled bulk defied belief. Surely it couldn't be real. It had to be a dream... a nightmare.

The beast dwarfed some of the homes around it. It balanced upon the rubble with four stocky legs that ended in curled claws meant for catching and ripping open prey. Its long thin tail swished behind it, throwing thick white clouds of snow up into the air. Its head sat upon a thick neck and bore a blue feathered crest. A line of blue feathers also ran down its back and stuck out from the back of its knees and the end of its tail.

However it was the dreadful beast's lizard like head that Jerack couldn't tear his gaze away from. The humongous drake calmly surveyed its surroundings with intelligent hungry yellow eyes. It seemed totally unconcerned that it was currently right in the middle of a human city.

Long sharp teeth flashed and blood dripped from its maw as it chewed its latest meal, the family that had just run past. It must have burst through the building and snatched them up in one lightning quick snap of its jaws. They hadn't had a chance.

Blood was splattered across the once pure snow where they had been just seconds ago, and stained bits of cloth fluttered away in the wind. If there had been anything left in Jerack's stomach he would have thrown up again. As it was he could only stand there and shudder uncontrollably with his eyes wide in horror.

One yellow eye of the beast flickered and Jerack thought it focused on him for a second. The beast continued leisurely chewing but Jerack had no doubt whatsoever that it was aware of him. It simply wasn't in a hurry, or maybe he didn't look that appetizing.

Time seemed to have gone still for Jerack, or maybe it was stuck in an endless twisted loop. There was only the fluttering snow and the gnashing of the drake's teeth, over and over again; every bite and chomping sound brought Jerack one step closer to losing his mind. It wore on him, like a countdown to his own demise spoken in a language he didn't understand. He was going to die.

Then the beast swallowed the last of its grizzly meal and to Jerack's surprise looked away down another street. Was it playing with him? Surely it wouldn't just leave him there. A buzzing sound built up in his ears. He didn't register it at first, but as soon as he realized it was there a hail of arrows tore down from the sky upon the drake.

The beast hunched its shoulders and turned its face from the unexpected barrage. The projectiles bounced and shattered on its grey scaly head. It was uninjured, but as it raised its head Jerack thought it looked infuriated. The beast roared again and the sound of its displeasure tore through the city, blasting away all other lesser sounds.

“Run you blasted idiot!” Jerack heard someone yell from behind him. It took a second for him to recognize the sound as language and another to move his stiff body and look for the source.

He turned to see a squad of guardsmen. The sergeant in front was mounted on a horse and bore a long hunting spear. He was motioning for Jerack to run.

Jerack cast a terrified look back at the beast, he was too afraid to move while it was still there. The beast however seemed to be descending from its perch among the rubble and was moving away from him towards the source of the arrows.

Jerack bolted. He didn't even think about it, he just did it. His feet carried him. Without looking back he rushed towards the soldiers. Please don't let it be following me! Please gods I beg you!

As he reached the soldiers in their blue uniforms the sergeant spoke again.

“Keep running lad, head for the fort,” he told Jerack before motioning to his men and leading them after the beast. Doing as he was told Jerack ran past them. He scampered desperately through the snow towards the end of the street.

Surely he was safe now? The guards were here and they had mounts and spears for hunting drakes. The beasts were far from invincible, even unusually large ones.

Jerack ran over to a barrel someone had placed up against a house and threw himself behind it. There he began to suck down air as he tried to catch his breath. When his lungs no longer felt like they were burning and the dark terror that had clouded his mind begun to die down he risked a look out from his hiding spot.

Dozens of guardsmen had the drake surrounded. Several groups with swords and spears circled it, working in unison to keep it at bay. Every time it tried to go after one group then archers hidden among the buildings would distract it with a rain of arrows.

The drake was hissing and growling as it twisted and turned madly in an attempt to catch its tormentors, but they hadn't hurt it yet. Its hide remained unbreached.

Suddenly one man got too close and the drake lashed out viciously. Its teeth closed down on the unlucky man and with a jerk of its neck it sent his corpse sailing through the air and over a building in a rain of blood.

The sergeant didn't waste the opportunity his man's death had created. He lowered his spear and spurred his horse into a charge at the beast's unprotected flank.

Jerack felt his heart soar. He was seeing something out of a story! He wanted to join the guard more than ever now. He wanted to be like the sergeant, fearless and skilled.

The mounted officer's horse launched itself forward and the clatter of horse hooves echoed through the streets. As he approached the drake it turned towards him. Jerack knew that was alright; its head was even more of target than its flank. A good strike there would bring it down instantly!

Jerack watched with anticipation as the two combatants closed. Surely the guardsman would be victorious.

Suddenly out of the corner of his eye Jerack noticed something strange. An odd breeze had begun to blow around the drake. It circled it like a slow whirlwind. The guardsmen closest to the beast begun to falter and retreat; some pulled back while others simply collapsed onto the ground and curled up in the snow.

With what seemed like a vicious smile the great grey drake then opened its mouth and roared towards the charging guardsman.

Its breath picked up the snow and blew it forward. What was it doing? Opening its mouth just made it an even better target. What was going on? Jerack felt his earlier dread creep back. Something was very wrong.

As the wave of blown snow reached the mounted officer he seemed to stiffen and his horse slowed. Jerack almost thought he saw white frost build up on them. Then they both stopped moving completely, right before impacting the drake. Jerack gasped in uncomprehending horror as the brave soldier and his mount toppled over stiffly to lay unmoving at the beast’s feet.

With a hissing noise that sounded almost like a snicker the terrible monster flicked its tail out and smashed the guardsman. Frozen chunks of meat were thrown into the air as he shattered. The crimson broken pieces of the man then fell to the ground and rolled through the snow.

The drake turned towards the other guardsmen and blew another blast of freezing breath towards them. They struggled futilely and fell as Jerack looked on trembling in numb despair. This couldn't be happening!

No wonder the beast was so large and active during the winter. It was a mutant. That wasn't fair. What were the chances of such a huge beast surviving being twisted by such powerful magic! How could the gods allow such a cruel joke?

As Jerack watched the mutant drake scatter the remains of the guardsman, leaving some of them standing as unmoving frosted statues, he had a dreadful premonition.

He knew the city was doomed. The beast would tear through Coroulis and no one could stop it. The entire city would be brought to its knees by the unholy thing. It would feed freely on men, women, and children. The guardsmen, nobles, and probably even the mages would be helpless before it and its killing magical cold.

In despair he realized most of the city's residents wouldn't even be able to flee. The roads were closed with snow, and very few of them would have the supplies necessary to make the journey to safety through the winter.

Some of his neighbors would die as they cowered in their homes until they starved, froze, or were eaten. Others would try and evacuate only to collapse along the road one by one as they struggled futilely to make the dangerous journey.

Coroulis and all it stood for was damned. Soon it would be a place of bloody terror, and soon after that a frozen graveyard. Jerack began to weep in despair as he stumbled blindly away.

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